Apparently, they are wearing all breast plates and two of them have shoulder plates. That should come out a little more when inked, since I use a different quality of line thickness and direction with different textured materials. As for the design of the costumes, though, I was basing it off a rough drawing made by one of the character designers. I don't know for sure, but I think each character was designed/written by a different member of the group. The one who did the second one from the right is the one who approached me.
To my knowledge, they are fans of PreCure and Utena. I definitely see the influence in the designs myself.
I appreciate any and all criticism, though. I already know a few things I plan on fixing when I eventually get to starting the final product. Particularly anatomy, posing, cheek position, line quality, hands, hair flow, and a few misunderstandings I made when turning this out compared to the original. The girl on the far left has a beauty mark beside/under her right eye and the actual hair for the girl with the glasses is a bit off.