LuciferOniichan said:
Wasn't the point to find flaws and getting critiques? You learn your mistakes this way.
Personally, I agree with everyone else above regarding of the breasts. But it's mostly the right breast that throw things off balance.
...Yeah I know... but...
The shame... It's choking me... urgh...
*dies from asphyxiation*
Funny, I noticed the double right-heel before her unusually compressed right-boob.
hi guys :)
so here's something for you guys to critique on...
used a 3d reference pic.
Techeese said:
hi guys :)so here's something for you guys to critique on...
used a 3d reference pic.
I like the coloring, but the nose looks almost nonexistent, giving her an alienish look.
maid said:
Funny, I noticed the double right-heel before her unusually compressed right-boob.
Dats just the shadow of the pantsu.
Quick line art of random little buggy robot dude that will be part of a much larger picture.
I like it except for the video camera for a head. That's a really overused feature.
And speaking of things that are overused, here's an incredibly generic Japanese schoolgirl from my cartoon.
Hehe, I know it. The original was a little different, but ended up very small in the final pic, so I needed easy to see features to make any of the detail noticable.
giascle said:
I like it except for the video camera for a head. That's a really overused feature.And speaking of things that are overused, here's an incredibly generic Japanese schoolgirl from my cartoon.
I'd say korean though. That hairstyle is quite uncommon in Japan.
giascle said:
And speaking of things that are overused, here's an incredibly generic Japanese schoolgirl from my cartoon.
Where are the tentacles?
maid said:
I'd say korean though. That hairstyle is quite uncommon in Japan.
I figured. I guess Korean could work, too, maybe????
poyohebat said:
Where are the tentacles?
There actually are tentacles in the cartoon.
aye aye, I should get some paper that isn't winkled :/
the first one a finished just a couple of days ago, and it's littered with problems, whatever. What I'm more interested feedback on the sketch below. more specifically I want feedback on Ritsu's arm. I'm not sure if it's an anatomy fuck up or just an unnatural pose... or maybe it's just fine, and I'm crazy.
danhibiki said:
more specifically I want feedback on Ritsu's arm. I'm not sure if it's an anatomy fuck up or just an unnatural pose... or maybe it's just fine, and I'm crazy.
ummm... well, it's a little unnatural, as the arm is kind of stubby. The elbow would look to come down right below her breasts. Generally it will come down closer to the hips (banana-armed people like me, they are right at the hips, but that looks weird for girls, so it should be a tad higher), or are just long enough to reach the top of the head (maybe just a little higher) if the elbow is pointed straight up, without lifting the shoulder. Her's seems to end below or at her forehead.
To be somewhere close to that position, the upper arm would probably be bent back slightly, but not quite as severely elevated, and the forearm would be closer to, but not quite, parallel with the table.
danhibiki said:
the first one a finished just a couple of days ago, and it's littered with problems, whatever.
I think it's sexy.
danhibiki said:
What I'm more interested feedback on the sketch below. more specifically I want feedback on Ritsu's arm.
To be honest, I think you'll find it much easier to get proportions and poses right in one go if you'd just start drawing things a lot bigger. (Example: drawing I haven't worked on in three weeks luuolo (fuck drawing)
)
poop
Ninsheart said:
To be honest, I think you'll find it much easier to get proportions and poses right in one go if you'd just start drawing things a lot bigger. (Example: drawing I haven't worked on in three weeks luuolo (fuck drawing)
)
yeah, mine's actually much bigger, i just shrunk it down to post here.
it's actually 4092 x 2893 (apparently that's A4 sized.)
Neat Hedgehog said:
ummm... well, it's a little unnatural, as the arm is kind of stubby. The elbow would look to come down right below her breasts. Generally it will come down closer to the hips (banana-armed people like me, they are right at the hips, but that looks weird for girls, so it should be a tad higher), or are just long enough to reach the top of the head (maybe just a little higher) if the elbow is pointed straight up, without lifting the shoulder. Her's seems to end below or at her forehead.
To be somewhere close to that position, the upper arm would probably be bent back slightly, but not quite as severely elevated, and the forearm would be closer to, but not quite, parallel with the table.
thanks I think you're right, plus looking at it the next day, I realize that her neck seems a bit off too. maybe i'll just have to bring up the collar a bit or something....
giascle said:
I like it except for the video camera for a head. That's a really overused feature.And speaking of things that are overused, here's an incredibly generic Japanese schoolgirl from my cartoon.
Are you making a "Hey Arnold" from japan?
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Oh^
Heres a something I drew last night to help me sleep.
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