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721. 

     StefanKinoshita
     

     kudichan said:
     I only wish it had been novel length ;_;

     uteki said:
     I would love it to be a novel length too!

     This was never intended to be novel length. I suppose I could expand on it if I wished, but due to the time it takes to right a novel, I'd rather spend the time on a more serious work. Not to say that this hasn't been a lot of fun.

     uteki said:
     Though if you were going to go pro ever, you would need to be more descriptive.

     giascle said:
     I'm divided on this chapter. I liked the general idea, but too much of it was exposition; I assume you wanted to just get it over with, but explaining everything in detail at the very end is cheating. I trust that you'd fix that though if you were to go back and edit the entire thing.

     Yes, of course. This is kind of equal to a first draft, so if I were to right a proper story, it'd be proof read and edited.

     I had a lot of fun writing this and its certainly made me want to start writing properly again. It was also really fun writing about real people.

     Thank you everyone for your kind comments. I don't want to come over all sappy, but this really does mean a lot as I hope to be a professional writer someday and to get a postive reponse like this from a silly story that is far from my best work is really encouraging.
     Writing this has also made me realise what I've been missing when writing in the past... an audience.
     If any of you would like to read any of my more serious stuff in the future either PM me your email address or facebook link (since I don't want to publish stuff online due to copyright issues.) I'm not making the presumption that you'd want to read my stuff, this is more for me so I have an audience and proof readers. If you do this you don't have to do really long constructive reviews a "hey, this is good. Keep it up" is fine.

     Posted 10 months ago # Quote
722. 

     Nin
     

     Wow, those were some gruesome deaths, ha ha.

     Posted 10 months ago # Quote
723. 

     Ichi-Chan
     

     What happened to me? D:

     Posted 10 months ago # Quote
724. 

     คภєк๏
     

     Welcome to Limbo.

     Posted 10 months ago # Quote
725. 

     sgt.Mango Garcia
     

     @Stefan
     I felt as if all 5 parts were lacking, they seemed to fall flat due to the fact that it seemed hurried and insufficiently descriptive.
     I do not mean to offend, this is constructive criticism- I was thoroughly entertained, I and feel as if you could have done much better is all.
     inb4 'you suck at writing'
     I never said I was an author or anything.

     Posted 10 months ago # Quote
726. 

     StefanKinoshita
     

     Mango, I completly understand and agree with you. As I said in my last post, this is far from my best work and is the equivalent of a first draft since it hasn't been edited or proof-read.

     Posted 10 months ago # Quote
727. 

     Kudeh
     

     There was once a little girl called Amy (she could only be seen with a microscope) who asked a handsome man called Kudi to revive a fanfic thread.

     Kudi was entranced by her 36DD breasts, and revived the thread for her.

     Posted 9 months ago # Quote
728. 

     Ichi-Chan
     

     kudichan said:
     There was once a little girl called Amy (she could only be seen with a microscope) who asked a handsome man called Kudi to revive a fanfic thread.

     Kudi was entranced by her 36DD breasts[b], and revived the thread for her.

     <3 Poor little, Amy. Could you shove it into her face even more what she lacks, Kudi?

     Posted 9 months ago # Quote
729. 

     Nin
     

     Not sure how he's supposed to shove Amy's small breasts into her own face.

     Posted 9 months ago # Quote
730. 

     Kudeh
     

     xichisex said:

     <3 Poor little, Amy. Could you shove it into her face even more what she lacks, Kudi?

     Amy has the biggest boobs on sancon.

     Posted 9 months ago # Quote
731. 

     Ichi-Chan
     

     Massage and they will grow!

     

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732. 

     Kudeh
     

     xichisex said:
     Massage and they will grow!

     

     

     She needs to have breasts before her breasts can be massaged

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     Posted 9 months ago # Quote
733. 

     Uteki
     

     xichisex said:

     <3 Poor little, Amy. Could you shove it into her face even more what she lacks, Kudi?

     NUH UH!
     THEY have totally grown since you last saw me on cam!

     They look nearly as identical to these melons~

     Heheh! Sorry Ichi! A blast from the past!

     Posted 9 months ago # Quote
734. 

     Kudeh
     

     MasterInfamous said:
     I'm speechless right now.

     The incredible size of Amy's breasts will do that to a person.

     Posted 9 months ago # Quote
735. 

     Ichi-Chan
     

     Amy, you're mature. You complain about me posting your images and yet you turn around and post half naked photos of my more intimate parts of my body.

     You need to grow up like Aaron does.

     Posted 9 months ago # Quote
736. 

     H-Ero
     

     Amy, aren't you the one who complains about people posting your pics without your permission?

     Posted 9 months ago # Quote
737. 

     Mascarpone
     

     Looks around thread... Decides to walk back out.

     Posted 9 months ago # Quote
738. 

     Ichi-Chan
     

     ^ Seriously and then she does that. I didn't even show anything remotely as personal as what Amy just posted of me. While I don't mind too much because I have posted this here before, it is an invasion of privacy to go to my person DA and just post my chest without permission and then to be hypocritical.

     Posted 9 months ago # Quote
739. 

     Nin
     

     xichisex said:
     Amy, you're mature. You complain about me posting your images and yet you turn around and post half naked photos of my more intimate parts of my body.

     You need to grow up like Aaron does.

     Talk about a disproportionate response. :C Clearly Amy meant no harm. Even if it really ticks you off that she reposted one of your pictures, it would have graced you to just tell her you'd like her not to do that.

     Posted 9 months ago # Quote
740. 

     Uteki
     

     xichisex said:
     Amy, you're mature. You complain about me posting your images and yet you turn around and post half naked photos of my more intimate parts of my body.

     You need to grow up like Aaron does.

     But this is an image which you had posted on Sancom publicly so ANYONE kind find it.

     You took a picture from my fb, and I didn't intend it to go anywhere else from that site. And it was more like a future warning to prevent anything worse happening.
     And I do recall warning previously that I do not want any photos from fb taken elsewhere.

     But I apologise Ichi.

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