Now We Dance started out well, but the main riff sounds really bizarre. I don't mean the melody, I mean the actual sound; I don't know if it's just poor synth programming, but something's off about it. The vocals should have echo instead of reverb; it fills the space better, and if used right it sounds like reverb anyway. The sax is horribly compressed; was it sampled from another song?
Consciousness is just an amateur remix of We Will Survive. It's interesting how you changed up the drop, but otherwise I don't really know what to say about it.
I haven't listened to your mix yet, but I'll tell you when I do.